Barefooted I am walking on a way,
A way with thorny pebbles all around,
etching my feet in a manner,
Which i don't know , how to convey,
A beautiful pattern of red was seen,
It aches , it pinches 'n' it leaves me restless,
But i don't know ,why don't i sway my way.
Walking non stop with a thought in my brain,
May be ,i'll be relieved n'er again,
Perhaps i was on this way cuz i hadn't any other,
But soon i was able to see another,
What i could see was a grassy lane,
May be it'll relieve 'n' 'll not let me feel any pain,
Doesn't matter ,whether i walk non stop from dusk to dawn,
But still i don't know why don't i sway my way..
With eyes full of questions , i turn back,
That red pattern eye to eye staring me,
surprisingly ,smiled at me with bliss,
And replied even without being questioned,
"Its 'cuz' you love this way"...
etching my feet in a manner,
Which i don't know , how to convey,
A beautiful pattern of red was seen,
It aches , it pinches 'n' it leaves me restless,
But i don't know ,why don't i sway my way.
Walking non stop with a thought in my brain,
May be ,i'll be relieved n'er again,
Perhaps i was on this way cuz i hadn't any other,
But soon i was able to see another,
What i could see was a grassy lane,
May be it'll relieve 'n' 'll not let me feel any pain,
Doesn't matter ,whether i walk non stop from dusk to dawn,
But still i don't know why don't i sway my way..
With eyes full of questions , i turn back,
That red pattern eye to eye staring me,
surprisingly ,smiled at me with bliss,
And replied even without being questioned,
"Its 'cuz' you love this way"...
16 comments:
mast jkhas waha waha brother
thnks bro..
excellent and great toward depth...keep it up bhai
Kabiraj,i really like this poem " why dont i sway my way"
thnks bro..
wellll............. ummmmmmmm...... as u wanted .....
i dont believe they r urs
edited some poems?
or translated?
nice poem!:)
thnks sakshi !!! :)
dude kuch toh ho gaya mere yaar ko......itni mast poem hai ki saare kavi fail hai
excellent rahul....ur all poems are gud, i liked all...but truely i liked this 1 d most....!!
oh !!!
m flying..he he..
thnks for ur compliments..
yup...jus cant sway yor way gettin2 know abt the hurdles ahead......
nice1 buddy..
thnks..
for ABHISHEK THAKUR..
they r my own bhaiya..no copy..
waise m glad to think that my poem r so gud that ppl can't blve that they r by me..HE HE..
THNKS FOR SUCH A COMMENT..
Its similar to "Road not Taken"..
Nice one..
I liked your blog man. Enjoyed reading it through..
Keep it up. Good luck.
Josh here
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